I don’t mind your embellishing my writing with yours, and I do like it–Just wanted to point out you shifted the narration from 3rd person to first. Best, Pornograph

Thanks for the comment! You’re inspiring 🙂 Sorry I have SUCH a problem with tense, you have no idea. I’ll fix it when I get back from my short shift at work.


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